Opinion Piece

At the age of twelve, a boy named Evan Savoi stabbed and killed his developmentally disabled playmate, thirteen year old Craig Sorger. He is currently serving a twenty six year prison sentence for first degree murder. He was tried as an adult for his crime even though he was legally still a minor. Many would argue that his crime was violent enough to validate his sentence, but what many don’t realize is what a twelve year old can conceptualize. The age of twelve is the very beginning of an adolescent being able to understand that death is irreversible. How can we allow the government to try children for crimes where they don’t understand the repercussions? Evan Savoi is an example of a childhood lost to incarceration in the juvenile justice system.

Currently in America, over twenty states allow children as young as seven to be tried as adults, and in some states this includes sentencing children to life in prison without parole. For all those parents out there, do you believe your child could understand that they had done something so wrong that they need to be punished for years? A seven year old's cognitive ability is at the level of simple mathematics and includes a vocabulary of only several thousand words. A seven year old is at the stage of emotional development where they are only beginning to understand and feel guilt and shame. Although we can not ignore that a child has committed a crime, we can better deal with it by rehabilitating instead of punishing the children. The juvenile justice system in America is obviously in need of reform, and a rehabilitation program would be the most successful and advantageous option.

A rehabilitation program would look very much like a group home setting. Rehabilitation facilities would house thirty to forty children and have live-in therapists available to children twenty four hours a day. The therapists and adults within the rehabilitation program would show the kids the love and encouragement they need and may or may not have had at their home. At the rehabilitation facility, the children would live the lifestyle of an average child while receiving the therapy necessary to become a working member of society. They would each have responsibilities around the facility as well as be receiving an education. They would also have individual therapy sessions to find the core reason why they have committed and or want to commit crimes, so that those issues could be addressed before the child’s release. As a part of the rehabilitation program, the length of their sentence would be contingent on the child’s progress in the program and change in moral.

This rehabilitative approach has been proven to work in Missouri’s juvenile justice system. Missouri has a recidivism rate of about ten percent, which means that only about ten percent of the children who go through the rehabilitation program are rearrested after their release. Currently, the average recidivism rate in the national juvenile justice system is about forty percent. Comparing these two statistics, it seems as though a switch to a rehabilitative program would be the logical solution, but there is even more incentive. A rehabilitation program costs about fifty thousand dollars per year per child whereas incarceration costs one hundred thousand dollars per year per child.

Knowing that it is necessary for the United States government to reform it’s juvenile justice system, rehabilitation is clearly the best way to do so. It is the most cost effective and is the longest lasting solution.

If you would like to help, go to http://www.petitiononline.com/merc1234/petition.html and sign the mock petition to show some of the California representatives that people care about this problem.

Petition To Convince Representative People Care About Changing to a Rehabilitation Program

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Letter To A Representative

Dear Representative,

I am writing to you to share my opinion with you on our current juvenile justice system and some changes I hope to see in it. As you may know, there are currently over 100 juveniles in prison with a life sentence without parole and over 100,000 children in the juvenile justice system nationwide. These children are incarcerated and then return to their life of crime when they are released. This is not beneficial to the United States because it costs the country around 100,000 dollars a year to keep one child incarcerated and there is constant crime.

The state of Missouri has begun to take measures to improve their juvenile justice system. They have turned toward rehabilitation and love instead of security guards and barred windows. If we could create a model for a national prison system that focused on rehabilitation, like Missouri’s does, we would have fewer adolescent and adult criminals. When young children commit crimes, they are likely to commit them again and end back up in jail. When a prisoner is rearrested, it is called recidivism. In America, the national average recidivism rate in the juvenile justice system is forty percent, whereas the recidivism rate in Missouri’s juvenile justice system is about ten percent. This is an obvious improvement and proof that their new kind of system works to change the kid’s lives. Missouri’s rehabilitation system not only changes children’s lives but it costs less than traditional incarceration. To rehabilitate a child costs about 50,000 dollars a year compared to the 100,000 it costs to keep a child incarcerated.

If you could help spread awareness by showing your support for these kids, we could change the situation in the juvenile justice system for the better. The easiest thing you could do to help is to support the need for a rehabilitation system, instead of supporting the incarceration system. I am petitioning our state senator to change the juvenile justice system in America, and if you sign the petition it will help being us closer to a better America. I am grateful for your time and consideration. Thank you for everything you do for our people.

Sincerely,

Mariah Ciani

Jeremy White

A young businessman stands before me. His name is Jeremy White. He looks put together and professional. No tattoos and no piercings, cleanly shaved and every hair in place. Jeremy seems like a very normal man, he tells us he was born on August Twenty Seventh of 1976 in Sacramento, CA. He grew up there with his mother whom he is very fond of. Right now he is working at Northwestern Mutual as a financial planner.

At age 33 he already has many words of wisdom to share. He tells the class “stay in school” “go to college” and “learn all you can.” He also tells our class to “think through big decisions” and to “not act on impulses.” He says these things as though from experience, I wonder from where. As we delve deeper into the life of Jeremy White I find out where all these golden nuggets of advice are coming from. His past.

Jeremy was in the school band in high school and had a great passion for drumming. From there he went on to Sacramento State to become a music major. After graduating college Jeremy was a drummer in a few obscure bands traveling around the United States and the World. Jeremy was even invited to Japan to play the drums for a Japanese band with a record deal. The crazy life he had as a musician influenced who he is today in many ways, although Jeremy has always had a good head on his shoulders. He is not the stereotypical rocker I would think would be standing in front of me telling me his story. He is a very kind young man who is just as responsible as any other person. He works hard at a job he enjoys, feels that he is a good listener and most of all, he is normal, he is afraid of sharks.

(we interviewed him for a writing assignment)

US sticking it's nose where it DOES belong

Many people make the argument that the United States should offer it's help to other countries instead of forcing it upon them.  I feel differently.  There is a time and a place when the US has needed to intervene and I honestly believed that it has helped these countries overall.  For instance in 2003 the US invaded Iraq and brought down their president Sadaam Hussein.  however, I am not condoning the Iraq war, there were many unnecessary things done during the Iraq war that I believe were morally wrong.  And yes, for all of you out there asking what about all the bombings and civilians killed because of the war, they didn't deserve it and I do not condone it at all.  Another example of when the US has "butted" in for a good reason is in afghanistan.  They are in Afghanistan for all the right reasons but acting in all the wrong ways.  So what I am trying to say is that there is a time and place for the US to intervene without offering help first.  This intervention should also include some rules so that war crimes and things of that nature do not happen.

Barder and the Flying Turban

Barder flew across the night sky.  Tonyo upon his back. They flew and flew over the mountains mountains and valleys.  Barder scared to look down and Tonyo in awe of what he saw.  A sudden gust of wind came of of the silence and slapped they across their tails and they plummeted.  Down they went, sinking until ' paws brushed across the ground.  As they floated along the ground they slowed and stopped along the outskirts of a town.  Tonyo stepped off and breathed in a huge sigh of relief.  Standing on the edge of this small town, his eyes glistened, he could hardly tear his eyes away from the village.  He was home.  How good it felt to be home.  Without looking away he removed the orange turban from his head and placed it upon Barder's, whispering thanks. Tonyo walked towards the village, kicking up tiny clouds of sand as he got closer and closer.  Barder watched wondering what would be in store for him next.

Writing in Reverse

Walking through the subway station he looks like any other person.  Blending in with the crowd.  You would never know where he has just come from or that he ever goes there.  When you see him you think of a man who lives in a little house with a front yard and a fence, with his wife and kids.  He seems sad, but you would never know.  He carries a newspaper.  Could he be checking the stock market?  Could he be reading about the most recent charity event in the city?  Where has he just been? The doctors office?  The bar? The world will never know.  He has just come from an apartment.  It is not his summer house or his commuter apartment.  No.  It is a secret apartment of his.  It is a small apartment in an unsuspecting neighborhood.  There are girls living there.  Lots of girls in a small, small space.  Many girls from all over, barely knowing how to speak english.  They work down at the corner of the street at night.  Collecting money to pay him back the debt for being brought to America.  When he leaves the apartment he turns and locks the 3 bolts on the door.  And again he blends in with the world.  You would never know where he has just come from or that he ever goes there.  When you see him, you think of a man who lives in a little house with a front yard and a fence, with his wife and kids.